Excerpt: William
Goldman's Adventures
in the Screen Trade.
p.185
Why?
Obviously, I can't be -sure of the answer. The
audience certainly knew a lot more about him
than the way the movie originally opened.
They knew he lived alone-, in a pit of an office
They knew went to sleep with the tv for company.
They knew he didn't sleep well, not when he's
up before the alarm. They knew there was a woman,
because of the photograph, they knew he felt
something for her from the way he saluted her,
they knew she wasn't with him, he was very much
alone. And they knew a lot more, too - yes, he
was a detective, not a successful one, and he
carried a gun, so he didn't seem like someone
to take lightly. The battered car told a lot
about him.
But mainly it was that business with the coffee.
Whenever anyone talked about Harper to me in
the weeks that followed, that was the moment
they remembered -- drinking that horrible stuff.
(just like the jump off the cliff is what people
always mention first in Butch.) And the laugh
that went along with it, that was a laugh of
affection.
In a detective story of this type Maltese Falcon,
The Big Sleep--all you really have going for
you is your main man: You see everything, the
whole world, through his eyes he keeps you company
every step of the way. And if you don't like
being with Sam Spade or Phillip Marlowe, not
all the plot skill in the world is going to make
it a happy journey. If you are turned off by
your host, forget it, it's over. And if the coffee
moment really turned out to be was an invitation
that the audience gladly accepted: They liked
Lew Harper.
From that moment forward, the script was on
rails. |