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William Goldman: Adventures in the Screen Trade

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Excerpt: William Goldman's Adventures in the Screen Trade.

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HARPER, out of bed now. He goes to the blank tv set, turns it of f. Now he moves to the window, lets the shade fly up. WE CAN SEE his of ice more clearly now--it doesn ' t look a bit better.

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HARPER, still in his underwear, running water in the sink, splashing it on his face, coming to life.

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THE TINY KITCHEN AREA. He's shaved now, wears pants and a short-sleeved shirt not tucked in. A tie is draped around his neck. There is a hot plate, water is boiling. Beside the water is a Chemex-type coffee maker. He takes a paper filter, folds it in half , folds it one more time, puts it into the Chemex. Then he takes a coffee can, pours coffee into the filter-

-- only the can's empty. No coffee left. Unhappily he stands there a moment, looks down-

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A WASTEBASKET. He lifts the lid. Inside is yesterday's coffee filter, the used grounds still there.

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HARPER. He hesitates a moment, then reaches into the wastebasket, takes out the used filter and old coffee grounds, puts them into the Chemex, and as he starts to pour boiling water in-

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A FILLED CUP OF BLACK COFFEE. HARPER stands beside it, shirt tucked in now, tie tied. He picks up the cup, takes a swallow--and then the horrendous taste of the stuff registers; it is like something you might drink in the Black Hole of Calcutta. He puts the cup down, walks past a framed photograph of a pretty smiling woman close to his age, kind of salutes the picture as he moves round a corner.


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