Screen vs. Stage:
The One-Minute Page
by Michael Sadler
I know several writers who
write both screenplays and stage plays.
I do, too. Historically, the
format for a screenplay and a playscript were two entirely different beasts. Not so anymore. There is now a convergence of the two, centered, I believe, on the
newfangled notion of "1-minute per page" for stage plays to match
that for screenplays.
The major difference
between a screenplay and the "Old Style" playscript was and still is
the amount of dialogue on a page versus the amount of action or, in the case of
plays, stage direction. There are
others, too. How many do you count in
this example?
SAM: You said what? (HE crosses to JOE, mouth
agape). You said what?!
JOE: (guilty) Um, I told her you were seeing
someone else. I guess I shoulda kept my
big mouth shut.
That
takes up four lines (including spaces).
But times have changed for the format elements themselves.
Here's
the New Style (Samuel French/Mollie Ann Meserve), using the same example:
SAM
You said
what?
(HE
crosses to JOE, mouth agape.)
You said
what?!
JOE
(guilty)
Um, I told
her you were seeing someone else. I guess I shoulda kept my big mouth shut.
In
12-point Times New Roman, that dialogue exchange takes up four lines.
In
12-point Courier Final Draft (CFD), that dialogue exchange takes up 10 lines.
For
screenwriters not familiar with stage plays, note the reversal of dialogue and
action/stage direction elements. Not
surprisingly, stage plays using the new formatting run about a minute now.
Saves on the purchase of stopwatches, I'm guessing.
Test
Question: Did you catch the period
inside versus outside the parenthetical?
If you
write both screenplays and stage plays, and say you're writing a 10-minute
stage play, the first rule, as we all know, is it must run no longer than ten
minutes. I really like the look of TNR
on a playscript page, but it's kind of tough to judge the running time by page
count alone using the Old Style.
Interestingly, for the New Style playscript, you'd think by merely switching
between CFD-12 pt. and TNR-12 pt., the page count would be pretty much the
same.
Not so.
Three
months ago I converted a 10-minute play (10 pages) using current formatting
(from CFD-12 to TNR-12 with one click of the mouse. I was shocked to discover that it added a page and a half to the
length! That's not good when the
submission guidelines specifically state, "10 pages maximum!" For purposes of this article, I just
converted one of my 15-minute plays (15 pages) and an 80 page play to TNR. The former adds 2 full pages, the latter 11
pages!
With
more and more submission sites calling for full-length plays at, say, a maximum
of 80 or 90 pages, the difference mounts up. Of course, if you start in TNR and
get to END OF PLAY at page 100, and then convert to CFD, you're probably okay for a 90-page max. Any longer in TNR, however, and it's going
to take some real effort to condense it.
Formatting
is not something we think about a lot, but it's the first thing a professional
at the other end sees. I'm still seeing
a lot of plays online written in the Old Style, which I suppose is fine if
someone asks specifically for it that way (what a friggin' hassle to convert
from FinalDraft!), or you're not submitting to major competitions or regional
theatre companies. My take on this is
that if my playscript differs in any significant degree from the current
standard, the reader who expects material to be sent in the latest industry
format is immediately distracted from the essence of my hard work. S/he has to break out that stopwatch! I'd rather s/he knows at first glance I'm
up to date on format so s/he can concentrate on my killer play, knowing it runs
for approximately the same time as the page count.
A final
word on conversion from FinalDraft to HTML.
Some play submission sites/competitions/festivals ask that material be submitted in
"HTML, Word.doc, RTF, or PDF," and only very few are allowing
FinalDraft submissions at this time. If
you write in FinalDraft and have to submit in HTML, you will lose at least
underlining function, perhaps others as well.
I didn’t check them all. Only by
going into your HTML editor and doing the "<u> word</u> "
thing for every word underlined will you get it back! Since this article is written in FinalDraft, I had to convert to
Word – Rich Text Format, and then convert to HTML to retain all the formatting
functions.
I
submitted my 10-minute play, "Don't Ask, Don't Tell" to this site in
HTML as a companion piece to this article to show the latest format. It’s the only play I’ve written with
multiple underlines. You will see the
problem I had to convert it for this article!
In the
final analysis, I much prefer PDF play submissions myself, which retains
everything, including Title and Cast pages, with one click of your mouse. Ah,
the details…
But at
least you get to read a short, funny play that is now running down in San Juan
Capistrano as part of ShowOff!, The Camino Real Playhouse's annual
International 10-minute Playwriting Festival.
And I'm sure the word underlining helped, 'cause it's killing down
there!